The table below shows the production of cacao beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998 .

The table below shows the production of cacao beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998 .
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The table illustrates the amounts of
cacao
beans that were produced in six global areas in the
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1992, 1994 and 1998.
Overall
,
cacao
production
increased in some areas and decreased in others. South
America
and
Asia
were the leading producers over the given period.
Furthermore
,
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significant increase in
cacao
bean
production
was seen in
Asia
. Between 1992 and 1998,
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cacao
bean
production
in South
America
rose from 1,43,000
tons
to 3,89,000
tons
and rising trends were
also
observed in
Asia
and Oceania, with increasing from 1,19,000 to 4,36,000 and from 40,000 to 76,840
tons
respectively.
Asia
also
had
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higher output rate
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each year peaking in 1998. The trends for North and Central
America
, Africa and England fluctuated from 1992 to 1998. Africa and England cut their
cacao
bean
production
by 4,000 and 7,000
tons
respectively, and Africa had the notably lowest figure in 1998.
On the other hand
, even though, small increases in
production
of the coffee
bean
were seen in North and Central
America
, the value remained the same in 1992 and 1998.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cacao, production, america, asia, bean, tons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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