You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The presented bar chart illustrates information about science qualifications held by individuals in Malaysia and
Singapore
.
Overall
, it can be vividly seen from the given chart many Malaysians leave school exams and they do not have a qualification in science
while
in
Singapore
far more students get a
bachelor
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bachelor's
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diploma. As is evident from the chart
master
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master's
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degree is equal
both
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in both
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of these countries with less than 5%.
However
, in terms of
bachelor
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bachelor's
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degree
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degrees
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Singapore
's students comprise 20%
and
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which
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it
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is
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almost
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double
than
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that
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of Malaysians
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Malaysians
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Malaysians'
Malaysian's
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performance.The figure for the people
leave
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who leave
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school exams makes up 35% in Malaysia
in contrast
this
level is less in
Singapore
with 30%.
Moreover
, the percentage of people
do
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who do
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not have a qualification in science
make
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makes
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up
the
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a
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huge proportion in both of them and they are 65% and 60% in Malaysia and
Singapore
respectively.

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