The line graph compares usage of daily electricity between winter and summer by hours, while the pie graph illustrates consumption of electricity by house tools. A glance at the graphs reveal that the most of demand is in the winter. Not suprisingly, the heating rooms and water cover the mass majority of the consumption.

The line

graph

compares

usage

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the usage

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of daily

electricity

between

winter

and summer by hours,

while

the pie

graph

illustrates

consumption

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the consumption

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of

electricity

by house

tools

. A glance at the graphs

reveal

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that the most of demand is in the

winter

. Not surprisingly, the heating rooms and water occur the mass majority of the consumption.

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can be seen in

first

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graph

revealed that the hourly demand for

electricity

stand

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at

the

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over 30.000 units in

winter

. During the day, the usage

decrease

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9:00 am. The highest amount of the unit peaks over the 40.000 between 9:00 pm and 00.00.

Secondly

, in the summer, the usage, lower than

winter

and drew a same line.

According to

pie

graph

, there is much amount

electricity

use for heating. Sequentially, the kitchen

tools

, media

tools

and the cleaning are by %17.5, 15 and 15. The heating

tools

consume more

electricity

than the others.