The pie charts compare the proportion of the trend in using water in six areas all over the world in term of three different categories
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it is clear that
more than 70% water
usage in Central Asia, Africa, South East Asia and South America Change preposition
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is related
agricultural
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agriculture
highest
distribution Correct article usage
the highest
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purpose is 88% in Central Asia. In same
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the same
field
less usage is 39% in North America and 32% in Europe.Add a comma
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