The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure provided reveals the figure of female
students
per 100 male students
of developed and developing countries
, in primary, secondary and tertiary school
in 1990 and 2000.
Fix the agreement mistake
schools
Overall
, it can be seen from the provided bar chart that the total of girls in both developed and developing countries
saw the
gradual rise as time elapses. Correct article usage
a
Moreover
, the amount
of girls in developed Change the quantifier
number
countries
was more than in developing countries
in
all three educational levels.
As is shown in Change preposition
at
rate
, the total of female learners in primary school increased considerably over a decade from 83 to 87 in developing Correct article usage
the rate
countries
, while
in developed countries
the symbol of students
saw slowly rose from 93 to 96 respectively. As for secondary education, showing 72 in 1990, this
total of female learners had climbed to 82 in 2000 in developing countries
, while
in developed countries
this
sum increased from 98 to 99. With regard to tertiary education, the total of female students
in developed countries
was two
much higher than in developing Correct your spelling
too
countries
in both years, showing 105/112 and 66/76 appropriately.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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