Some people prefer to work in the same type of job throughout their lifetime while others like to change the type of jon they do. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Change is an important part of our
life
. some people ado
pt s
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Some
imilar
work
for their whole
life
while, other think tha
t to
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
move for different
job
from their current
job
.
This
essay shall discuss both side and
last
i will give my
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refers to the speaker or writer
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pinion. On the one side, There are many reason why empl
oyees
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reasons
do same
work
for t
heir whol
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the same work
e
life
.
firstly
, people
get
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job
according t
o t
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jobs
a job
the job
heir interest and they give their best for
work
and th
ese
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to
kind of t
hing
denotes a person or thing
this
give them
job
satisfaction.
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, As
pe
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For
r survey 2019, 70 % of people choose
job
according t
heir interest
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job, according
and they gave enough money to fullfill their
basic ne
put in effect
fulfil
ed and they
also
save some money.
Secondly
, some people can same
work
for
company
because
they t
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a company
the company
companies
hink
company
give increment and another thing is employees experience level is
also
increases.
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instance,
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increased
according to survey, 80% of
people
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the survey
surveys
do
work
for
com
pany be
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does work
cause is
increase
their experience level and
company
gave promotion to their employees.
In addition
, employees like the
job
environment. These reason why they
do sa
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reasons
me
job
for th
eir whol
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the same job
e
life
. On the other side, people are change thei
r current
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are changing
change
are changed
have changed
job
for new
job
because
, if th
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a new job
new jobs
ey change their current
job
they can increas their k
nowledg
become bigger or greater in amount
increase
e power and they do
job
for various networks.
For example
, 20% of people think that they don't
increase
their knowledge so they go for different one.
In addition
, government j
ob
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,
s doesn't
increas
e knowledge and
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don't increase
thinking ability.
Secondly
, sometime people
don't h
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
appy with their current
job
and they get bored from their old
job
. so these reason
w
to a very great extent or degree
So
hy they
prefe
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reasons
r for different
job
.
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different jobs
a different job
As per my opinion, It depends on person mindset which type of
job
they do for their bright career and
also
increase
for thinking power.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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