Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Many organizations have policies on how their employees would
dress
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in the
office which
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office, which
is called "
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code" and the employees must obey these dressing rules while working in
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entities.
In contrast
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, there are
companies allowing
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companies, allowing
their staff to
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freely, or more simply, to wear casual clothes to
work
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as they believe the quality of their staff's
work
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is much more important than how they would look. Dressing smartly, in my opinion, is highly recommended if we
work
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in a formal working environment, a law firm
for example
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, where we normally have clients coming to our office for meetings in any weekday, and in
such
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case, we would want to look
professionally
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professional
and neatly before our significant guests to gain their trust. But if we
work
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in a company operating in a more creative environment, advertisement,
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, do we need to put on a suit or other formal
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to
work
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? Let's think again. I used to
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in an advertising company where creativity, flexibility and comfortableness are encouraged so that the team could produce more creative and unique initiatives or ideas for their clients' products. There the employees could wear casually as long as they do not look ridiculous in what they are wearing as the employers believe that dressing more freely would help their team works more flexibly and comfortably. And it does
work
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. In summary, how we should
dress
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in the office depends totally on where we
work
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and whether there is any
dress
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code to which we are subject. Neither dressing smartly nor dressing casually is an absolute choice for us as both dressing styles could help us do our
work
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more efficiently in different ways.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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