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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

#organisations #employees #dress #value #quality #work #appearance
Around
world
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the world
, there are several
organisations
 and each one has different ideas
of
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about
 whether their employees should wear or not.In my opinion, employees should
dress whatever
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dress, whatever
 they want
.
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.
 Formal dressing should be
necessery
absolutely essential
necessary
unnecessary
 in some
organisations
such
 as
politics not
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politics, not
 all of them
.
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.
 I believe that if workers are free choice of what he or she wear in
workplace
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the workplace
,
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,
they could work more efficiently.
However
,
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,
there must be rules for dressing because
decision
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the decision
 of what to wear can be hard
with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
 expansive range. Employees ought not to wear unusual
clothes
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clothes, for
for example
 too mini skirts
ot
introduces an alternative
or
 shorts. A company or an organisation have value with their employees work not their dress or appearance. Quality of work always more important than employees' appearances.If employees do their
works
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work
 and do not have under pressure what
wear
we are
we're
 to do
,
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,
 the organisation's success could be better than others. To sum up
,
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,
except some jobs or
organisations
, employees should be free to
decision
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decide
 of dressing.
Thus
,
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,
their
organisations
 will be flawless and compelling.
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