The bar chart below shows the total case of COVID-19 in ASEAN countries per 5 May 2020. The table displays how COVID-19 has affected three different regions in Indonesia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar chart and table depict the number of COVID-19 patients in ASEAN and the

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of people who are confirmed, recovered, and, dead in three regions in

Indonesia

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5th May 2020.

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the chart, Singapore has the highest

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in ASEAN.

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Indonesia

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, Jakarta is the most affected region. By looking at the bar chart only 5 out of 10 countries have more than 3000

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of COVID-19. Singapore and

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have the highest number of infected people – 19.351 and 11.396. The Philippines came 3rd with a bit over 50% of Singapore's

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which is 9.979. Other Asian countries – Vietnam, Laos, Cambodia, Myanmar, and Brunei - have less than 300

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. Laos has the lowest number with only 19

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. Based on

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and how COVID-19 affected

Indonesia

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, Jakarta has the highest numbers in all 3 categories. Jakarta has a total of 4539 confirmed

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, 632 recovered

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, and 408 deaths which is 3 times higher than others.

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West

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and East

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have similar numbers. East

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has more recovered and deaths - 178 and 117.

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West

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has more confirmed

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- 1252

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Wed May 06 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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3 paragraphs

194 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

COVID-19
ASEAN
cases
pandemic
affected regions
total cases
trends
increase
plateau
comparison
significance
patterns
healthcare facilities
population density
rapid growth
implications
region-specific details
bar chart
table

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The bar chart below shows the total case of COVID-19 in ASEAN countries per 5 May 2020. The table displays how COVID-19 has affected three different regions in Indonesia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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