The bar chart below shows the total case of COVID-19 in ASEAN countries per 5 May 2020. The table displays how COVID-19 has affected three different regions in Indonesia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

The bar chart below shows the total case of COVID-19 in ASEAN countries per 5 May 2020. The table displays how COVID-19 has affected three different regions in Indonesia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Write at least 150 words
The bar chart and table depict the number of COVID-19 patients in ASEAN and the
amount
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of people who are confirmed, recovered, and, dead in three regions in
Indonesia
per
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on
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5th May 2020.
According to
the chart, Singapore has the highest
cases
in ASEAN.
While
in
Indonesia
, Jakarta is the most affected region. By looking at the bar chart only 5 out of 10 countries have more than 3000
cases
of COVID-19. Singapore and
Indonesia
have the highest number of infected people – 19.351 and 11.396. The Philippines came 3rd with a bit over 50% of Singapore's
cases
which is 9.979. Other Asian countries – Vietnam, Laos, Cambodia, Myanmar, and Brunei - have less than 300
cases
. Laos has the lowest number with only 19
cases
. Based on
region
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the region
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and how COVID-19 affected
Indonesia
, Jakarta has the highest numbers in all 3 categories. Jakarta has a total of 4539 confirmed
cases
, 632 recovered
cases
, and 408 deaths which is 3 times higher than others.
For
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West
Java
and East
Java
have similar numbers. East
Java
has more recovered and deaths - 178 and 117.
While
West
Java
has more confirmed
cases
- 1252
cases
.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words indonesia, cases, java with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • COVID-19
  • ASEAN
  • cases
  • pandemic
  • affected regions
  • total cases
  • trends
  • increase
  • plateau
  • comparison
  • significance
  • patterns
  • healthcare facilities
  • population density
  • rapid growth
  • implications
  • region-specific details
  • bar chart
  • table
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