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The line graph illustrates the population figure of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012. Summarise the information

The line graph illustrates the population figure of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012. Summarise the information
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The given line graph illustrates the
population
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 rate of four different Indian
turtles
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 over a period of 32 years (1980-2012).
As
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 an
overall
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 perspective, the generation of
turtles
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 had a fluctuating trend throughout the
year
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. The highly populated ones are olive Ridley
turtles
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whereas
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 the least number was the leatherback
turtles
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. The
population
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 rate starts from 100
by
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for
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 all four types of
turtles
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 in the
year
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 1918. Olive Ridley turtle made a significant increase in
population
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 and reaches
at
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140 between 1996 and 1998. Later it showed a fluctuating trend and drop to 300 in the final
year
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. In terms of leatherback
turtles
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, the
population
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 figure reaches
the
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 peak in 1985 which is about 110 and decrease
90
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to 90
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.
This
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 species of
turtles
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 had a remarkable drop after 1989 and reached about 60 in 2012. With regards to green
turtles
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 and other all species remark fluctuating
population
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 rate and reached
to
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110 and 90 respectively in the final
year
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, turtles, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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