Some people have the same time of job throughout their lifetime , while other prefer to change the type of job they do.discuss why people choose to do both and give your opinion.

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contemporary era, people want to acquire enough knowledge by changing jobs.
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some who might not be receptive to change
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stay the same; remain in a certain state
remain
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throughout their
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essay I shall discuss both the views and at
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last
the superlative of 'little' that can be used with mass nouns and is usually preceded by 'the'; a quantifier meaning smallest in amount or extent or degree
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I will give my opinion.
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with
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there are numerous benefits to people have remained same the
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throughout their
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first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
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and foremost, Nowadays
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many people want to do identical
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throughout their
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due to they are very interested to do their
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therefore
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Therefore
, people have
same
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the same work
work
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throughout their
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life
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lives
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the same work
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in their
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such
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as scientists, doctors and so on.
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secondly
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Secondly
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if people do
same kind
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the same kind
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in their
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life
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life, then
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which can be
chanced
made or become different in nature or form
changed
to higher salaries in their
life
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as well as they are set on friendly environment because people have the same type of
job
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throughout their
life
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. On the flip side
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,
there are
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extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
enormous
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people want to change their jobs within
short period
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a short period
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firstly many
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Firstly, many
Firstly many
folks change their
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due to they are not suitable for in
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environment as well as they do not
satisfied
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satisfy
to do
work
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in
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on
the same
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of throughout their
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secondly
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Secondly
, Nowadays
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,
the
technology
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has been rapidly increasing by over a past year.
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therefore people
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Therefore, people
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keep Change their
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in their
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through the help of
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who can acquire a enough knowledge about new
technology
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equipments.
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, which helps to get people more experience in their field
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so
to a very great extent or degree
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which can be
chanced
made or become different in nature or form
changed
to gain higher salaries.
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For
an illustrates, according to
survey
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a survey
by times of India 70 percentage people who Change their
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for learning new
technology
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in
market
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the market
and skills. In my opinion, people have changed their
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within
limited period
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a limited period
through
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way people can acquire a knowledge about new
technology
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and experience in their
further
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life
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.
whereas
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Whereas
, people have the identical
job
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throughout their
life
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due to they are very interested to do
work
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in
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particular
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particular jobs
a particular job
the particular job
job
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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