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In many countries senior positions have higher salaries compared to those of young workers of the same company. Some people think this isn’t justified. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,
occasionaly
now and then or here and there
occasionally
 we can observe that people who
work
 in senior positions earn more amount of money compared to young employees of identical firm.While some proportion of people do not consider that it is
rightly
Suggestion
right
. I strongly disagree with
this
 statement
,
Accept space
,
because people who use to
work
 in higher positions have more
work
expirience
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
 compared to
propotion
the quotient obtained when the magnitude of a part is divided by the magnitude of the whole
proportion
 of young workers.Due to the knowledge which senior workplaces know, naturally they earn more.
In addition
, knowledge, older people can share
experience
Suggestion
experiences
 with young workers, as they have a long
work
 experience and a lot of practises behind.
because
Suggestion
Because
 of
this
 their salary much higher than young worker who use
work
 in the same company,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 think so. For
exampe
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
, the company which is called 'Google, prefer to employ staffs who many times made mistakes these employees have already known what it means defeat, and already have a lot of experience.
due
Suggestion
Due
 to the way which they passed.
Nevertheless
, I strongly believe that not only many countries must commit themselves to paying higher remuneration to senior positions than to young employees, but
also
 throughout the world that
this
 can speed up the
work
 process so that employees keep track of experienced and experienced leaders. In conclusion, I believe that
this
 is a fairly fair decision to appoint more salaries for higher posts.
this
Suggestion
This
 can lead to good changes in the future
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