Coins and paper money will soon be replaced by credit and bank cards. Eventually we will have a cashless society which will be safer and more convenient for everyone. Do you agree or disagree

Throughout the ages, the

paper

cash and coins

were consider

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were considered

the main exchange between people. In the near future, the conventional system will be

accupide

held or filled or in use

occupied

copied

by credit cards, which means the reduction in

paper

money

. I have a strong faith in that, it will come to more secure society, and a comfortable

way

for

every one

all people

everyone

.

having

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Having

found a substitute to an

antiont

belonging to times long past especially of the historical period before the fall of the Western Roman Empire

ancient

way

of using

money

, I think it is the most effective

way

to keep the

rubbers

a thief who steals from someone by threatening violence

robbers

away.

First

of all, carrying a great number of

money

on, will put individual in a dangerous off being rubbed, and by that, they may be in a risk of getting

merrder

killed unlawfully

murdered

, as if a sudden conflict

occur

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occurs

.

so

to a very great extent or degree

So

the credit cards which are used

instead

of

paper

money

are far more safety.

For instance

, if someone have a bank card and be

pickpucketing

he or she

will not be concern

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will not be a concern

will not be concerned

will not be concerned concerned

of

finantiol

involving financial matters

financial

disadvantage since the rubber couldn't cash it anymore.

Ferther

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Further

Farther

more, those electronic cards are much more friendly to use and portable too

,

Accept space

,

they are

also

performing with high speed in transforming even a huge amount of

money

, so people could manage

thair

of them or themselves

their

finance

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finances

by sitting on

thair

of them or themselves

their

sofa.

while

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While

, in

past people

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the past people

had to go to

bank

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the bank

early to do a very basic thing

such

as pay the bills or

transfe

transfer somebody to a different position or location of work

transfer

money

and put

time

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the time

and effort to finish

these chore

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these chores

this chore

in a day.

Although

the

foretale

being actually such in almost every respect

virtual

fairy-tale

fractal

way

is far

convinete

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more convenient

convenient

and immune

system but

Accept comma addition

system, but

it

have

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has

an impact on the environment.

since

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Since

, those smart cards are made of plastic. And will

threten

pose a threat to; present a danger to

threaten

aur

of or belonging to us

our

or

environment. In conclusion, I believe that,

being replaced

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been replaced

by credit cards,

paper

money

and coins should diminished for

thair

of them or themselves

their

insecurity and delay in using.