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Nowadays families move to different countries for work. Some people think it has a negative effect on children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

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Factors
such
 as the increasing unemployment have forced many families with children
to move
Suggestion
move
 abroad. The effects of
such
 decision
has influenced
Suggestion
have influenced
 in a certain way the children's
life
.
Although
 the impact of a new
life
 seems to affect them negatively, in the long run they could be aware of the advantages of
this
life's
Suggestion
life
 change. Children are not easily as adults to adapt to new circumstances. In fact
,
Accept space
,
 leaving schools and the group of the peers from their homeland could be
diffucult
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
 for them at the beginning. Add to
this
, approaching to the
habbits
an established custom
habits
habit
 of a new place could represent an insurmountable obstacle.
For example
, many children could feel frustrated after moving to a different country,
also
 blaming the parents for their choice.
This
 is only the initial phase
,
Accept space
,
 in which the parents should help their children to go through.
On the other hand
, the most difficult initial step could be overcome and
then
 the children could become aware of the possibilities the new country as to offer to the whole family. Children would make new friends and would adapt themselves to the new place. In
this
 process of adaptation could
also
 intervene cultural associations who help people to feel close to the new country and its lifestyle. Only after experiencing a sense of initial 'disorientation' the children are ready to enjoy the new
life
. To sum up, moving abroad and its consequences are not easy to face from the point of view of the youngest members of the family. Some individuals need more time to adapt to the changes and the parents should support them in
this
 process. Time after time children will appreciate the benefits of the change.
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