You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

Dear Sir/Madam, I am Krushna Nahak writing
this
letter to bring your attention that,
i
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had enrolled for a
cricket
course
at your sports club two months back.
However
,
due to
my health condition
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i
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will not
able
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be able
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to finish the
course
.
Cricket
is my
favorite
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game.
This
course
si
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is
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very special as it has not only
cricket
couseres
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courses
but
also
it has
fitnesss
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fitness
training sessions included in
this
course
.One more is every candidate will have
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opportunity to meet and have a session
cricket
with one of the greatest
cricketer
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and god of
cricket
Mr. Sachin Tendulkar. I can not continue
this
course
since
i
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got a fracture on my left hand and
docket
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advised me to
take
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rest for six months since it is a major crack.
This
news
deressed
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impressed
me a lot since
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had
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good batting average and good keeping strength among all the players in our batch.
This
also
brought sadness to my entire family. Till now
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have only completed 20% of the
course
. I was wondering
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there any refund policy for the remaining
months
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course
. I will be
gratefull
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grateful
if you can arrange a refund if it is feasible. I am waiting for your sincere positive reply. Yours Faithfully Krishna
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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