You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Krushna Nahak writing

this

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letter to bring your attention that,

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had enrolled for a

cricket

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course

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at your sports club two months back.

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due to

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my health condition

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will not

able

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to finish the

course

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Cricket

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is my

favorite

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game.

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course

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very special as it has not only

cricket

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couseres

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courses

but

also

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it has

fitnesss

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fitness

training sessions included in

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course

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.One more is every candidate will have

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opportunity to meet and have a session

cricket

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with one of the greatest

cricketer

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and god of

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Mr. Sachin Tendulkar. I can not continue

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course

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since

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got a fracture on my left hand and

docket

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advised me to

take

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rest for six months since it is a major crack.

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news

deressed

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impressed

me a lot since

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had

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good batting average and good keeping strength among all the players in our batch.

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also

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brought sadness to my entire family. Till now

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have only completed 20% of the

course

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. I was wondering

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if is

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there any refund policy for the remaining

months

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course

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. I will be

gratefull

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grateful

if you can arrange a refund if it is feasible. I am waiting for your sincere positive reply. Yours Faithfully Krishna

konerukrishnakant2011Mon May 11 2020

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

212 words

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You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

Structure your letter

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Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimise the bad effects?