You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Krushna Nahak writing

this

letter to bring your attention that,

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had enrolled for a

cricket

course

at your sports club two months back.

However

due to

my health condition

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will not

able

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to finish the

course

Cricket

is my

favorite

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favourite

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game.

This

course

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very special as it has not only

cricket

couseres

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courses

but

also

it has

fitnesss

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fitness

training sessions included in

this

course

.One more is every candidate will have

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the

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opportunity to meet and have a session

cricket

with one of the greatest

cricketer

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and god of

cricket

Mr. Sachin Tendulkar. I can not continue

this

course

since

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got a fracture on my left hand and

docket

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the docket

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advised me to

take

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rest for six months since it is a major crack.

This

news

deressed

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impressed

me a lot since

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had

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good batting average and good keeping strength among all the players in our batch.

This

also

brought sadness to my entire family. Till now

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have only completed 20% of the

course

. I was wondering

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if is

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there any refund policy for the remaining

months

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course

. I will be

gratefull

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grateful

if you can arrange a refund if it is feasible. I am waiting for your sincere positive reply. Yours Faithfully Krishna

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Linking words
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2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

212 words

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You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

Structure your letter

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