Some employers offer their employees subsidized member of gym and sport clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Consider the arguments from both aspects of his possible debate, and reach a conclusion.
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Now a day's many organization provides funds to their worker's with membership of different clubs, thinking that it will keep them fit and in good shape making them more active and effective at
work
. But, few boss's believe that it does not provide any purpose. In this
essay I would like to express both sides of it with relevant examples.
Firstly
, I agree with this
statement as it gives motivation to many employees to join gym or sports clubs which they couldn't join due to its fee. Finance is provided by the employers can be the key, as it also
benefit companies in various ways, such
as it promote motivation among workers to achieve and get this
offer and secondly
, it keeps employees happy and as we all know any organization can achieve successful only when they have good and targeted workers. For example
, in a study it is proven that if workers are given some kind of benefit, then
they tend to work
harder to achieve it. The bottom line is, it changes the environment of the work place
if their employees are happy.
a place where work is done
workplace
Secondly
, workers who join this clubs
or use Suggestion
this club
these clubs
this
benefit's they are more physically and mentally fit. They are more active and efficient at their work
. For instance
, As workers get motivated to join the club and do their favourite activity, it also affect
their overall health which Suggestion
also affects
keep
their mind and body healthy and active, it Suggestion
keeps
also keep
them from getting sick to different diseases.
To summarize, both have its pros and cons, but as per the example I believe it has more pros Suggestion
also keeps
then
cons. Employers who see it does not have any benefits they tend to put more focus on conjunction used in comparatives
than
work
then
providing additional activity funds which overall conjunction used in comparatives
than
also
affect motivation of employees and their health as workers seating in office for long periods without any chance of getting engaged in other cultural activity. So in conclusion, I believe, workers should be provided with subsidized member for gym or sports club.Submitted by tajex25512 on
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