The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years
The two pie charts show a comparison of the percentages of various types of French
energy
production in 1995 and 2005. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen in the pie chart that of the two years coal remains the most used Linking Words
energy
. Use synonyms
While
other Linking Words
energy
remains a little Use synonyms
energy
to be produced from the two years.
In 1995, coal and gas became scattered Use synonyms
energy
produced. Use synonyms
Similarly
, in 2005, coal and gas became the biggest Linking Words
energy
to be produced. The difference in Use synonyms
increase
in gas Add an article
the increase
energy
in 1995 and 2005 was 0.68%, Use synonyms
while
coal was 1.13%. Linking Words
Likewise
Linking Words
in
Nuclear and other Change preposition
apply
energy
Use synonyms
experiences
an increase namely nuclear around 3.7% and other Wrong verb form
experienced
energy
around 4.2%. Use synonyms
Whereas
on petro, it experienced a very drastic decrease of around 9.72%.
It can be concluded from the pie chart that coal remains the largest Linking Words
energy
produced. And of all types of Use synonyms
energy
, almost all experienced an increase, but in petro Use synonyms
instead
experienced a drastic decrease.Linking Words
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