The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years
The two pie charts show a comparison of the percentages of various types of French
energy
production in 1995 and 2005. Overall
, it can be seen in the pie chart that of the two years coal remains the most used energy
. While
other energy
remains a little energy
to be produced from the two years.
In 1995, coal and gas became scattered energy
produced. Similarly
, in 2005, coal and gas became the biggest energy
to be produced. The difference in increase
in gas Add an article
the increase
energy
in 1995 and 2005 was 0.68%, while
coal was 1.13%. Likewise
in
Nuclear and other Change preposition
apply
energy
experiences
an increase namely nuclear around 3.7% and other Wrong verb form
experienced
energy
around 4.2%. Whereas
on petro, it experienced a very drastic decrease of around 9.72%.
It can be concluded from the pie chart that coal remains the largest energy
produced. And of all types of energy
, almost all experienced an increase, but in petro instead
experienced a drastic decrease.Submitted by sittihikmayuliani25 on
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