The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years
The pie charts show a comparison of the percentages of various types of French willingness production in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, it can be seen in the pie chart that coal remains the most used strength.
While
other preparation remains a little productivity to be the product. In 1995, coal and gas became scattered preparedness produced.
Similarly
, in 2005, coal and gas became the biggest toughness to be produced. The difference in
increase
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in gas willingness in 1995 and 2005 was 0.68%,
while
coal was 1.13%.
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Nuclear and other willingness experiences an increase namely nuclear around 3.7% and other preparation around 4.2%.
Whereas
on patrol, it experienced a very drastic decrease of around 9.72%. The conclusion of
this
pie chart Of the two years Almost all types of energy Rise Up. Coal remains the
high energy
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type,
while
a number of patrols have experienced a very drastic decline.
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