In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?
By significantly increasing population and cars,
traffic
congestion is becoming very severe in most cities around the world. One possible solution
in order to reduce traffic
jams is to impose heavily
taxes on car drivers and spend these taxes on improving public Suggestion
heavy
transportation
. This
essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of such
a solution
.
With regard to benefits, one of the best benefits is that it will discourage car owners from using their cars in nonessential times. This
would mean that they would start using public transportation
which it has been constantly said over these recent years, using public transportation
will result in air pollution reduction. So not only it is beneficial
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only is it beneficial
traffic
problems but
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problems, but it also
problems but it also
also
it is very beneficial for environment
as well. Another benefit would be that it would boost Suggestion
the environment
quality level
of public Suggestion
the quality level
transportation
. In other words
, it can lead to better public transportation
services as the demand for using public transportation
grows
because it has been reported that many cities still have poor public Suggestion
to grow
transportation
services. For instance
, we can see that since many of buses and trains are very old and inconvenient, many people are not keen on using them. Thus
, taxes can be spent on renewing them.
Nevertheless
, there are some lucid drawbacks to such
a measure. Firstly
, imposing these high taxes can be a huge burden on many people especially
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people, especially
to
their work by their own cars and Suggestion
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also
can lead to disputes between authorities and general public
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the general public
In addition
to this
, heavily taxes can lead to much more gap
between wealthy people and poor people in some societies which are suffering from Suggestion
the much more gap
a much more gap
much more gaps
poor economic system
. Suggestion
the poor economic system
Therefore
, these huge taxes are not fair to most people.
To sum up, without a doubt traffic
congestion can be very problematic. And perhaps some people are adherent of such
solution
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solution, although
although
, since it is an inequitable solution
, governments should come up with a more reasonable policy.Submitted by nahid.rezaiesadr on
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