Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by local farmers. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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The line chart depicts the number of passengers travelling by London's Underground Station on a particular day. The data are calibrated in numbers. Overall, the amount of passengers has fluctuated throughout the day from 6 am till 10 pm. The maximum number of passengers was 400 at 8 am and the minimum was 100 at 6 am and 4 pm respectively.

To begin

with, 100 people

initially

boarded the underground train at 6 am which

then

skyrocketed and quadrupled to attain an astonishing 400 travellers at 8 am only to be plummeted afterwards to reach its half at 10 am.

Thereafter

, it rose back and remained levelled off during the lunch hours, after which it witnessed a steep fall to its original 100 at 16:00 which

subsequently

surged dramatically to achieve a figure of just under 400 at 18:00.

, a sharp decline was noted where it managed to retain only about 120 metro passengers which afterwards fluctuated until 10 pm.

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161 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by local farmers. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

Many students choose to study at colleges and universities that are far away from the places where they grew up. Do benefits of this outweigh the drawbackss?

Government should spend money on railways rather than roads.Do you agree or disagree?

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