The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below illustrates the
consumption
of fish
and some diverse sort
of meat in a European country between 19V9 and Y..E. Fix the agreement mistake
sorts
According to
the table fish
diagram had steady changes. Lamb consumption
has rapidly decreased. Beef
consumption
had
dramatically increased in twenty-five years. And Unnecessary verb
apply
the
chicken Correct article usage
apply
consumption
is the only meat that has increased in this
time period. According to
the graph Beef
and chicken had markable changes in this
time period. Fish
and Lamb had slightly changed. It also
shows that in the beginning
Add a comma
,beginning
the
Correct article usage
apply
beef
had the highest consumption
with two hindered thirty and fish
was the lowest sixty- five. Beef
and lamb consumption
are
started in the middle of the diagram with hindered fifty Change the verb form
is
consumption
per week.Submitted by kimia.yegan on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, fish, beef with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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