Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Developing and underdeveloped countries need intrusive vital growth in the departments of education
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trade and health
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having said that
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many argue that developed nations should give a hand in the aforementioned field to the underdeveloped countries.
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it can be considered as double-edged sword
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certain extend I agree with
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school of thought. On the one hand, many people believe that developed nations should provide financial aid to the countries struggling to thrive.Presumably, many rich countries already giving
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to the Underprivileged,
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, we couldn't see much visible improvement to these nations due to the internal and international political agendas have been taken place rather than the priorities needed for the concerned subjects. To illustrate, America is raising and giving a huge amount of financial
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to Africa, but we couldn't see much improvement in many parts of Africa.
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, developed countries always have their own agendas and it will lead to exploitation In some extent.
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, these rich countries have economic motives in the field of mining, oil, and weapons.
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, people and the government of a
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should have the stability and sustainability to thrive as a developed nation and they should come forward to curtail the oversight in their own
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opponent of
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notion has distinct argument.
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The nation which doesn't have stability in the
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always seek
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from rich nations and
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will lead to stability and economic grown in their
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America and their alliances have
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and Syria
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, terrorist groups were removed completely.
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However many
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act of
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would have their own international political agenda. To recapitulate
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having considered both the arguments and counter argument
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people and the governments of one
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should act up on their own problems and solution rather than seek help from developed countries
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to thrive as great nation all should have a cordial relationship.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • underdeveloped nations
  • economic disparity
  • global cooperation
  • moral obligation
  • historical exploitation
  • interconnected world
  • economic stability
  • quality of life
  • trade relationships
  • humanitarian aid
  • capacity building
  • dependency syndrome
  • sustainable development
  • bilateral agreements
  • economic priorities
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