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Some people think that it is a good thing for senior management positions to have very high salaries compared to other workers of lower positions in the same company. To what extent do you agree.

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The advance of working has been very important for several decades in order to increase in both of payments and position.
Although
 many people agree with
this
 statement, I disagree with
this
 opinion, as the more you get a higher
level
 the less you will be free.
This
 essay will compare between a management position and
frontline
Suggestion
Frontline
 worker. There is no doubt that a senior manager will be more paid than a lower
level
 as
this
plural of "this"
these
 people have more responsibility in each department.
Therefore
, these senior groups may battle through several problems,
such
 as a
man power
the force of workers available
manpower
, a client's complaint, a new project of how to gain more income and so on,
In contrast
, while they have been working so hard, a certain organization need to rewards
this
people
Suggestion
person
 as their task outcomes.
For instance
, my manager has been working for the company for more than ten years and dedicated himself a lot, so he can have a long vacation like twelve days
respectively and
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respectively, and
 a big bonus
in
Suggestion
at
 the end of the years, while he always complains of stressful meetings and he has suffered from migraine from some serious issues that he has to deal with it.
On the other hand
, working
in
Suggestion
at
 a lower
level
 can earn less income than management
level but
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level, but
 these people would not find it difficult to solve some obstacles in each day because they do not have to attend the projected conference as their boss does.
Additionally
, these workforce will go home without any serious issue in their head.
As a result
, they can rest and sleep tightly without disturbing from other coworkers. To sum up, it is extremely true that a high salary will provide for people who have to take care many
job
Suggestion
jobs
 and responsibilities and a lighter task would get paid lower. I personally prefer a small
level
 as I do not happy to handle with serious problems to a big money and huge responsibilities.
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