The line graph below shows the number of monthly active users of some social network and messaging services between 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph represents monthly active
users
of social media and messaging service
over a six-year period from 2010 to 2015.
Fix the agreement mistake
services
Overall
, all platforms gain their
popularity after their launch. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Moreover
, Facebook is the most used platform among all and its users
grow linearly over the period of time.
Twitter and Facebook started gaining their names in 2010, but difference
in the number of Add an article
the difference
users
increases from 600 million to almost 1300 millions
. Facebook Change to singular
million
users
rose almost 250 % from 600 million to 1600 millions
. Twitter Change to singular
million
users
rose steadily from almost none to almost 300 millions
in 2015. Change to singular
million
In addition
, Twitter users
plateaued in the time frame of 2014 to 2015.
WeChat started gaining users
in 2011 and increased almost linearly to 750 million. Number
of WhatsApp Change the article
The number
users
started increasing in 2013 from 400 millions
to 950 Change to singular
million
millions
in 2015. WhatsApp Change to singular
million
users
grew sharply
than WeChat and Instagram. Correct quantifier usage
more sharply
Also
, WhatsApp users
showed a sharp increase rate from 2013 to 2014 and got doubled.Submitted by abhi.jecrc.me13 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words users, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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