Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people' salaries to pay for public services such as roads and schools. Other thinks high taxes are bad. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that it is necessary for government to take a
larg
above average in size or number or quantity or magnitude or extent
large
amount of
taxs
charge against a citizen's person or property or activity for the support of government
taxes
tax
of people's salaries for constructing roads and education services.
However
, there is another group of people who disagree with high taxes.
First
of all, imposing
taxs
charge against a citizen's person or property or activity for the support of government
taxes
tax
on
people's
Suggestion
person's
salary, especially who earn more, is common in many countries as a way to improve community well-being; especially those which lack the transportation and educational services.
Also
, it is necessary for governments to impose taxes to save the country's budget and
also
, to build more facilities and to develop
economy
Suggestion
the economy
. In my opinion, putting higher taxes on
people's
Suggestion
person's
salary is crucial for maintaining schools and public services which are needful in our
dailylife
Suggestion
daily life
.
For instance
, nowadays many schools in Iran have become hospitals because of low space for patients in many medical
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
as a way for struggling against
covid
-19.
On the other hand
, putting
high tax
Suggestion
high taxes
a high tax
on salaries
have faced
Suggestion
has faced
many critics. Obviously, poor people who don't have a well-paid job tend to suffer more for paying taxes than others
.
Accept space
.
For instance
a simple worker who earns 400$ monthly, is not able to pay 200$ for taxes; especially nowadays that expenditures are growing
cosiderably
to a great extent or degree
considerably
.
However
, it is often easy for people who are rich to avoid paying taxes. To conclude, paying regular taxes is necessary for all the people around the world as they are all responsible for their own country. But, governments should
also
put poor people under their consideration and take
lower taxes
Suggestion
the lower taxes
of their salaries than other groups of people.
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