Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.

Many people hold that women ought

tp

in the direction of

to

be permitted to join the

army

, the navy and the navy, as the members of

opposite sex

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the opposite sex

have the rights for it. To a certain extent, I agree that women should have permission for it.

However

to a great extent, I disagree with the notion. Some people claim that the idea of women joining the

army

is not reasonable.

Firstly

, they believe that women are exquisite in nature. If the governments allowed women to join the

army

, it would

ruined

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ruin

the true nature of women by making them more masculine.

In addition

, it is thought that women and men differ in duties. For

this

group of people, women are supposed to take care of the family.

However

, I strongly agree that to provide gender

equality women

Accept comma addition

equality, women

should be part of the

army

. As we all know, women have been fighting for their rights for centuries, asking for equality.

Furthermore

, being a soldier can bring immense benefits to women's life. These benefits

includes

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include

the skills

such

as time management, self-

dicipline

a branch of knowledge

discipline

disciplines

which can be formed in the

army

.

Finally

, it is thought that protecting one's country is every citizen's duty.

Therefore

, everyone should participate in

this

process to feel as a part of the whole national pride.

Israil

Jewish republic in southwestern Asia at eastern end of Mediterranean; formerly part of Palestine

Israel

is a good example where the women are obliged to join the

army

. To conclude, in despite of the fact in most countries women are not allowed to join the

army

, I believe that regulations should change in near future.