The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the normal proportions of several meals which consist of nutrients that can cause unhealthy if eaten very much.
Overall
, sodium, saturated
fat find the largest proportions in supper. Where added sugar is most used in snacks. Correct word choice
and saturated
However
, these three nutrients less use
in Wrong verb form
used
breakfast
and more during dinner.
At breakfast
and snacks, sodium is used in equal proportions which are
about 14 Correct subject-verb agreement
is
percentage
where it is mostly used in dinner more than Replace the word
per cent
two-fifth
. Correct your spelling
two-fifths
However
, only less than one-third
is used at lunch. Moreover
, the highest usage is saturated fat found at dinner at about
more than one-Change preposition
apply
third
where it used
in the lowest portion at Add a missing verb
is used
breakfast
.
On the flip side, added sugar is more popularly used as snacks more
than Change preposition
for more
two-fifth
. Added sugar finds 2nd most percentage at supper, which is less than one-fourth. But at the time Correct your spelling
two-fifths
of
Change preposition
apply
breakfast
and lunch, it uses less than one-fifth portion.Submitted by sadman122292 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words breakfast with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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