It is clear from the graph that the ratio of smoking men were the highest over the period given, while the women were the lowest in general.
It is clear from the blueprint that the ratio of
smoke
men was the highest over the phrase given, Replace the word
smoking
while
the women were the lowest in general.
It is clear from the table that TV followers in the UK were the highest in the most of phrase
given, Fix the agreement mistake
phrases
while
the radio was lowest in general.
It is clear from the graph that cell phone services were the highest in most of the span given, while
residential phone services were lowest in general.
It is clear from the blueprint that numbers
of men were the highest in Correct article usage
the numbers
the
most of the Correct article usage
apply
stretch
given, Fix the agreement mistake
stretches
while
women were the lowest in general.
It is clear from the sketch that local-landing
was highest over the style given, Correct your spelling
local landing
while
the mobiles was
lowest in general.
It is clear from the table that the numbers of visitors to the USA were highest in Change the verb form
were
the
most of the Correct article usage
apply
phrase
given, Fix the agreement mistake
phrases
while
Brazil was lowest in general.
It is clear from the blueprint that exports were highest in Canada in
Change preposition
for
the
most of the duration given, Correct article usage
apply
while
Australia was lowest in general.
It is clear from the graph that the GDP of Japan was increased
Over the season given, while
Ecuador Correct word choice
apply
was
declined in general. Unnecessary verb
apply
This
illustration compares GDP growth in Tunisia, Japan and Ecuador during
2007 to 2010.Change preposition
from
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