Many high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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people argued that

most of the organisation men are assigned to higher

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developing

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nations, whereas

others argued that females

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deserve those positions equal importance should be given to girls.

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that women's are capable to handle the

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with

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. I completely disagree with the statement.

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with, in present time girls are more educated in different streams. They are exploring their talents in various

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fields

so it's quite difficult to underestimate. Most of the employer gives preference to males

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in

higher positions without seeing their experience and

knowledge

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it's totally unfair with women's. Hiring should be

base

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based

on the talent, experience and skills rather than

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the gender base

.

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, in medical field females are more knowledgeable than boys they are proficient in

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field, they can

progess

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progress

profess

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effectively if companies encourage them.

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scientifically

proved that girls have

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strong memories

a strong memory

and grasping quality than boys if they offered

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a higher position

higher position

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they will get motivated and do

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work hard

to achieve the goals. They put their total efforts to complete task. Some scientists claimed that

girls

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the girls

have never giving

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have never given

are never giving

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were never given

up attitude which help to lead. On the

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, there are few reasons

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for

hiring male on

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higher positions

a higher position

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of all, men's are more focused towards work and they have good

knowledge

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of

market

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the market

. They are more creative in leading the company.

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CEO of Google organisation his name is

Prakash he

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Prakash, he

is one of the top CEO of

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the world

because of his work ethics. He has a quality of convincing power with

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quality he collaborated with other nations and expand his business.

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, men's are more stronger physically and mentally they have ability to complete task of any work whether it's

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required

physical strength.

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, most of the construction companies recruit males for

there

of them or themselves

their

positions. In conclusion, I believe that, both genders are important for the

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(biology) the process of an individual organism growing organically; a purely biological unfolding of events involved in an organism changing gradually from a simple to a more complex level

growth

of the workplace. Equal importance should be given and hiring should be based on the

knowledge

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of the

position

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.