Today, wordly corona virus widespread becpome every nation problem, including education sector and it make many educational officrs and experts suggest the government to spent more budget for free internet access. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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ovid

-19 which was established as a pandemic in 2020 has caused various problems in many sectors of life

such

as education. Paid

internet

access m

ake

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makes

it difficult for students who have to do distance learning

thus

making many educational officers and experts provide fees to use

nternet

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the internet

for free. I strongly believe that

this

way will be an effective way to enhance learning and reduce s

tudents burden

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the students' burden

students' burden

student's burden

during the pandemic. The main reason I believe free

internet

access is an effective way is that the global economic landscape changed dramatically to the brink of recession in just three months. The government decided to put the corona virus prevention policy

first

in order to save lives and human health despite the negative impact on the economy. It is caused parents to lose their income, so they unable to pay for their children’s learning needs even meet b

asic need

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basic needs

such

food.

For example

some of students

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, some students

from South Solok were worried that their

internet

fee would not suffice to support online learning because the

internet

is limited.

On the other hand

, remote learning and the closing of public institutions provide some difficulties for students, especially in finding resources for learning. The only thing that can be relied on is the

internet

where the students can find books or journal online.

For example

, Indonesian government offer i

Pusnas

which has a fairly complete collection of books. Free journals can

also

be accessed online at sites

such

as e

lsevier,

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Elsevier

pringer,

the lowest stone in an arch -- from which it springs

Springer

science direct, and many more. In conclusion, spending more budget for free

internet

access can provide r

eief

the feeling that comes when something burdensome is removed or reduced

relief

to student burden. It is e

pecially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

important at the time of crisis when the Covid-19 spread because the virus not only attacks human health but

also

complicates the human economy.

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