the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The given six pie charts demonstrated the
water
usage of six different regions of the world (North America
, South America
, Europe
, Africa
, Central Asia
, and South East Asia
) on
three types of use (agricultural, Change preposition
in
industry
, and domestic) which represented in percentage.
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industrial
Overall
, the used
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use
water
for
South Change preposition
in
America
Asia
and Africa
were
mostly for Correct subject-verb agreement
was
agriculture
, meanwhile
North Add a comma
,meanwhile
America
and Europe
had the
similar portion in terms of industrial and Correct article usage
a
agriculture
. There were
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was
a
minimal Correct article usage
apply
water
usage for domestic use in all six areas of the world.
North America
and Europe
was
the two Change the verb form
were
region
that used Change to a plural noun
regions
water
on main ly
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mainly
agriculture
and industrial use with almost half for North America
(48 percent
) and 53 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in terms of factory and Change the spelling
per cent
agriculture
used of a number that exceeded 30Change the spelling
per cent
percent
with 39 percent
for North Change the spelling
per cent
America
and 32 for europe
.
In terms of Change the capitalization
Europe
water
usage in South America
, Asia
, and Africa
, the biggest proportion were
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was
water
used for agriculture
with the
percentage that exceeded three Correct article usage
a
fifth
for all of them 71 Change to a plural noun
fifths
percent
for South Change the spelling
per cent
America
, 84 for Africa
and 88 and 81 within Asia
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