The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006.

The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006.
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The line chart shows how much
oil
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was produced and consumed in China from 1982 to 2006.
In
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overall
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, it can be stated that during the time under review, there was a tendency to increase both
oil
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manufacture and consumption.
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, it is noticeable that the use of
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grew sensitively faster than it managed to produce over the entire duration. Approximately 2
million
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barrels
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of
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were produced, and the same amount was spent at the very beginning of the period.
Oil
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production increased by exactly one
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barrels
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, and
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rate was maintained until 1993. Meanwhile,
oil
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consumption remained stable until 1990, after which it increased markedly by 1
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barrels
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per day in 1993. The trend of increasing
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consumption in China has been increasing
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production since 1994. A small, insignificant increase in
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production is remembered for the other part of the period - up to 3.5
million
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barrels
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per day.
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, the amount of
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consumed grew at lightning speed by 1.5
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every 6 years and
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reached its peak of 6
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in 2006.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, million, barrels with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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