The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006.
The line chart shows how much
oil
was produced and consumed in China from 1982 to 2006.
In
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Overall
overall
, it can be stated that during the time under review, there was a tendency to increase both oil
manufacture and consumption. Additionally
, it is noticeable that the use of oil
grew sensitively faster than it managed to produce over the entire duration.
Approximately 2 million
barrels
of oil
were produced, and the same amount was spent at the very beginning of the period. Oil
production increased by exactly one million
barrels
, and this
rate was maintained until 1993. Meanwhile, oil
consumption remained stable until 1990, after which it increased markedly by 1 million
barrels
per day in 1993. The trend of increasing oil
consumption in China has been increasing over
production since 1994.
A small, insignificant increase in Change preposition
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oil
production is remembered for the other part of the period - up to 3.5 million
barrels
per day. In contrast
, the amount of oil
consumed grew at lightning speed by 1.5 million
every 6 years and finally
reached its peak of 6 million
in 2006.Submitted by KooPerFolk 1# on
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