The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006.
The line chart shows how much
oil
was produced and consumed in China from 1982 to 2006.
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overall
, it can be stated that during the time under review, there was a tendency to increase both Linking Words
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, it is noticeable that the use of Linking Words
oil
grew sensitively faster than it managed to produce over the entire duration.
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were produced, and the same amount was spent at the very beginning of the period. Use synonyms
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rate was maintained until 1993. Meanwhile, Linking Words
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consumption remained stable until 1990, after which it increased markedly by 1 Use synonyms
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production since 1994.
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oil
production is remembered for the other part of the period - up to 3.5 Use synonyms
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In contrast
, the amount of Linking Words
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finally
reached its peak of 6 Linking Words
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