he graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how much energy was consumed by US residents since 1980 from a 2008 report projecting until 2030. As can be seen, there are an upward trend in energy used with the exception of
Hydropower
and this
trend is predicted to continue in the future. In addition
, the volume of petrol and oil consumed has registered the highest data which is projected to peak in 2030 while
Hydropower
has displayed the lowest data which will bottom in the last
given year according to
the prediction.
Fossil fuels including petrol and oil, coal, natural
gas have been the dominant type which will maintain Correct word choice
and natural
its
position in the future. In 1980, the amount of petrol and oil stood at 35 quadrillion units, ascended slightly by nearly 5qu to reach 40qu in 2008 despite Correct pronoun usage
their
of
the fluctuation. It is expected that will continue to increase more significantly by 10qu to hit 50qu in 2030. Change preposition
apply
Similarly
, Coal used in the US is expected to rise considerably from 15qu in 1980 to 30qu in 2030. Likewise
, 2030 will see a remarkable growth of 10qu to reach 25qu in 2030.
Besides
, all categories of natural resources such
as nuclear, solar/wind, hydropower
stood at 3qu in 1980, Correct word choice
and hydropower
however
, while
nuclear and solar/wind are
predicted to rise slightly of 5qu to reach 7qu and 2qu to reach 5qu in 2030, Change the verb form
is
hydropower
will remain unchanged albeit some fluctuations in accordance with the projectionSubmitted by Quỳnh Trang Vũ on
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