The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008
The two bar charts illustrate the number of graduates and alums that took part in five different activities during 2008 in the UK.
Overall
, the
Correct article usage
apply
further
studying and part-time working
Replace the word
work
was
especially popular among all the students. Change the verb form
were
Also
in 2008 youth in the UK was
not interested in volunteering.
In 2008 almost 30000 of the graduates continued their studies at university, Correct subject-verb agreement
were
while
only 3,500 of them did volunteering. After college 17,735 of this
students worked part-time and 16,235 were unemployed.
Most of the postgraduates continued their studies (2,725) or had part-time Correct determiner usage
these
works
(2,535 after college in 2008. Fix the agreement mistake
work
Moreover
, there were 1,625 unemployed students and less than 1000 of then
Correct your spelling
them
did
Unnecessary verb
apply
volunteering
.Wrong verb form
volunteered
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