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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, intoday’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge orexperience.

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Every educational
subject
 has
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 own and equal importance in
student's
Suggestion
a student's life
student's lives
the student's life
life
, no matter it is
history
 or
science
 and
technology
.
However
, nowadays, it is believed that the value of
science
 and
technology
 related subjects outweighs the need of
history
subject
 as today is
era
Suggestion
the era
 of
technology
. In
this
 essay,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will put forth my arguments regarding views in following paragraphs. To advocate the
history
,
history
subject
 acts as a
knowledge
 bridge between past and present. To elaborate, in today's world, most of the families are nuclear families and have
hectic schedule
Suggestion
a hectic schedule
hectic schedules
. So, parents do not have enough time to familiarise with past events and massacres
to
Suggestion
of
 their children
.
Accept space
.
Thus
, by studying
history
 in educational curriculum, students become aware about the past of their country and world.
Moreover
, it is the best way to preserve
culture
. To explain, owing to globalisation, children are more inclined towards western
culture
, especially in developing countries. Through
history
subject
,
may be
by chance
maybe
 they will know about the cultural dresses, cultural
fastivals
a day or period of time set aside for feasting and celebration
festivals
festival
festivities
. In result, by gaining
knowledge
 about their beautiful
culture
, they would adopt it in their
life
.
On the other hand
, learning about
science
 and
technology
 is crucial to
servive
continue to live through hardship or adversity
survive
survival
 in
this
 contemporary era. It is well known fact that
technology
 has revolutionized the every facet of
life
. Many works are operated by machines and gadgets in daily
life
. To use that, children have to get
knowledge
 about
technology
. Apart from it,
science
subject
 is necessary to make
life
 better. We all know that
science
 is gaining success day by day. To remain in touch with these days
life
Suggestion
lives
, the study of basic
science
 is necessary for every child. In conclusion,
although
science
 and
technology
 are crucial educational curriculum subjects, the importance of
history
 in
preservation
Suggestion
the preservation
 of
culture
 and in
knowledge
 of
past
Suggestion
the past
 cannot be overlooked. According to my opinion,
history
 and
science
 subjects should be compulsory in primary and secondary schools.
Submitted by Gurpreet Singh on

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