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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, intoday’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge orexperience.

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Every educational
subject
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 has
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 own and equal importance in
student's
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a student's life
student's lives
the student's life
life
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, no matter it is
history
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 or
science
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 and
technology
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.
However
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, nowadays, it is believed that the value of
science
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 and
technology
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 related subjects outweighs the need of
history
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subject
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 as today is
era
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the era
 of
technology
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. In
this
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 essay,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will put forth my arguments regarding views in following paragraphs. To advocate the
history
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,
history
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subject
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 acts as a
knowledge
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 bridge between past and present. To elaborate, in today's world, most of the families are nuclear families and have
hectic schedule
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a hectic schedule
hectic schedules
. So, parents do not have enough time to familiarise with past events and massacres
to
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of
 their children
.
Accept space
.
Thus
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, by studying
history
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 in educational curriculum, students become aware about the past of their country and world.
Moreover
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, it is the best way to preserve
culture
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. To explain, owing to globalisation, children are more inclined towards western
culture
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, especially in developing countries. Through
history
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subject
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,
may be
by chance
maybe
 they will know about the cultural dresses, cultural
fastivals
a day or period of time set aside for feasting and celebration
festivals
festival
festivities
. In result, by gaining
knowledge
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 about their beautiful
culture
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, they would adopt it in their
life
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.
On the other hand
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, learning about
science
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 and
technology
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 is crucial to
servive
continue to live through hardship or adversity
survive
survival
 in
this
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 contemporary era. It is well known fact that
technology
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 has revolutionized the every facet of
life
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. Many works are operated by machines and gadgets in daily
life
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. To use that, children have to get
knowledge
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 about
technology
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. Apart from it,
science
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subject
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 is necessary to make
life
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 better. We all know that
science
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 is gaining success day by day. To remain in touch with these days
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life
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lives
, the study of basic
science
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 is necessary for every child. In conclusion,
although
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science
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 and
technology
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 are crucial educational curriculum subjects, the importance of
history
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 in
preservation
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the preservation
 of
culture
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 and in
knowledge
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 of
past
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the past
 cannot be overlooked. According to my opinion,
history
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 and
science
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 subjects should be compulsory in primary and secondary schools.
Submitted by Gurpreet Singh on

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