you have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel

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Dear

SIr

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, My name is Gautam Narain SInghani. I have just returned home after spending 3 nights at your

hotel

in Mumbai and my

room

number was 3333. The staff members were friendly and cooperative and the location was very convenient.

However

, I am utterly disappointed with the

room

facilities. As I had visited

the

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Mumbai at peak summers, which was around 44 degrees Celsius, it was very hot and humid in my

room

and on top of it, the air conditioning system was not working properly. Because of the extreme heat, I had to keep open my

room

windows and

hence

it was very noisy as the

hotel

was on the main road. Due to

this

, I got very little sleep during my stay at your

hotel

. I would like to suggest you

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keep checking the cooling system of the rooms regularly, to make

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the stay

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comfortable for the visitors at your

hotel

. Perhaps, you could consider giving me some discount on my

holiday visit

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your

hotel

. I hope to hear from you soon. Regards, Gautam Narain Singhani

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Clear and correct grammar

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181 words

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