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For some people, learning in a group is the most effective method while others prefer one-on-one instruction. Discuss both ideas. What is your opinion?

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Methods of gaining knowledge are important factors in the learning process. There are numerous people who believe that studying individually is
the better
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the best
 option while others consider that collaborative way of education is excellent.
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 essay will discuss both the perspectives and will elaborate my opinion. To embark upon, prominent reason for
study
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 one to one is the
convenient
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most convenient
 where the student can choose
subject
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subjects
a subject
 according to their interest, frame suitable timetable and
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 they can excel in academics. Another factor can be
minimal amount
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a minimal amount
 of distraction which helps students to concentrate effectively in order to rectify mistakes and develop techniques for their ease.
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recent survey
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a recent survey
 showed that youngsters who decide to learn alone have more concentration,
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 can memorise more coursework and for a longer period of time.
On the other hand
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,
group
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study
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 helps children to enhance
knowledge
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the knowledge
 as in class everyone shares their opinion about the ongoing topics and it is advantageous to adapt other learning techniques.
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,
group
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study
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 creates competitive spirit among them, due to
this
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 one can work with more dedication which help to achieve outstanding grades.
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subject
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subjects
a subject
such
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 as mathematics must be studied in
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group
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a group
groups
 which helps to gain some good tricks and methods which are useful to clear concepts. In my opinion,
group
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 learning is highly recommended for students because it can teach them how to counter with competition, helps in increase knowledge as
student
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a student
students
the student
 can clarify the doubt instantly by asking from
professor
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a professor
 or classmates.
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, teachers keep strict observation that which is beneficial for them so that children complete the task properly. In conclusion, the different strategies of studying either in
class
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a class
classes
the class
 of students help to adapt various ways of solving a problem, could develop
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a tendency
the tendency
 to compete or
study
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 individually with more concentration in order to learn, attain
skills
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the skills
.
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