The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue. Some people argue that it is necessary for economic growth, while other claim that it damages local industry. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

There is
split opinion
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a split opinion
regarding the transportation of products across the countries. Some people believe that for economic development, it is essential.
However
, other counter argues by saying that native firms are affected by
this
trade. As
such
there are both merits and demerits to supplying goods across the national borders.
Although
, I am of the opinion that business dealing is
factor
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a factor
which may influence
country’s economic condition
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the country’s economic condition
. Examining the former view, import –export across the nations can not only increase the income of local
firms but
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firms, but
also
giving them offers to produce goods in huge quantity.
Furthermore
, international companies provide job opportunities for the local community. As the company flourishes, there is
increment
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an increment
in income for the people and gross economy for the nation.
For instance
, cities like Saudi Arabia import all the edible products from other countries for their land not suitable to support the vegetation and export crude oil to other countries. Needless to say, these entire benefits stand nation in
a good stead as
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good stead as a
far as rising employment opportunities and development of
nation
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the nation
a nation
is concerned.
On the contrary
, the latter view suggests that international brands popular in a limited area.
For example
, with the arrival of brands like Nike,
puma
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Puma
and Adidas, local manufacturers are facing trouble in selling their products.
Besides
, it is
also
true that foreign trademarks are cheaper than local ones. The shopkeeper of native industries
struggle
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struggles
hard to sell their products against their cheaper counterparts.
Hence
, it is apparent that why a section of society is against the international business. From what has been discussed above, one can conclude that despite the disadvantage of the foreign trade its advantage is indeed. Global mobilization of
goods enhances
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goods, enhances
the financial development of
country
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the country
a country
.
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