The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue. Some people argue that it is necessary for economic growth, while other claim that it damages local industry. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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There is

split opinion

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a split opinion

regarding the transportation of products across the countries. Some people believe that for economic development, it is essential.

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, other counter argues by saying that native firms are affected by

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trade. As

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there are both merits and demerits to supplying goods across the national borders.

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, I am of the opinion that business dealing is

factor

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a factor

which may influence

country’s economic condition

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the country’s economic condition

. Examining the former view, import –export across the nations can not only increase the income of local

firms but

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firms, but

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giving them offers to produce goods in huge quantity.

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, international companies provide job opportunities for the local community. As the company flourishes, there is

increment

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an increment

in income for the people and gross economy for the nation.

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, cities like Saudi Arabia import all the edible products from other countries for their land not suitable to support the vegetation and export crude oil to other countries. Needless to say, these entire benefits stand nation in

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good stead as a

far as rising employment opportunities and development of

nation

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the nation

a nation

is concerned.

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, the latter view suggests that international brands popular in a limited area.

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, with the arrival of brands like Nike,

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Puma

and Adidas, local manufacturers are facing trouble in selling their products.

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, it is

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true that foreign trademarks are cheaper than local ones. The shopkeeper of native industries

struggle

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struggles

hard to sell their products against their cheaper counterparts.

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, it is apparent that why a section of society is against the international business. From what has been discussed above, one can conclude that despite the disadvantage of the foreign trade its advantage is indeed. Global mobilization of

goods enhances

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goods, enhances

the financial development of

country

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the country

a country

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

289 words

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The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue. Some people argue that it is necessary for economic growth, while other claim that it damages local industry. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

In many parts of the world, some famous people are considered as 'role models' and they are having an increasing influence on the young. Is this a positive or negative development?

Last year you attended a presentation skill course at the Sydney College of Australia. Your new employer has asked you to provide copies of your reports and assignments as quickly as possible. Write to the director of the school and request these documents.

Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people's salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays most green energy is becoming evermore prevalent in both developed and developing countries. Some argue they greatly reduce cost ad better for the environment. Others believe they are a serious threat to energy security. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use their money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?