Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities . For this reason , their jobs are better done by men and other by women . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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In the society

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we can see that men are

exceling

very good;of the highest quality

excellent

excelling

in some occupations and women are successful in other jobs

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some people opine that

this

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discripancy

a difference between conflicting facts or claims or opinions

discrepancy

is caused by the inborn features and skills of both genders

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I disagree with that opinion

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Firstly

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the best performance in one's career is depend on many other factors

such

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as dedication

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will_power

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and opportunities

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Manish Malhothra

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who is a renowned fashion designer in Bollywood film industry

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earlier

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Earlier

people believed that women only can

became

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become

the best dress makers as

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field is dominated by females

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his

hardwork

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hard work

and innovative ideas made him the number one option among film stars not only

heros but

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heroes, but

heroes but

hers but

hears but

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heroines when they think about a party wear

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secondly

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Secondly

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in the modern era people get equal training and resources for their profession

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nowadays it is quite common to see female soldiers in

Indian Army

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the Indian Army

because they get muscle strengthening

exercise

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exercises

and

scientificaly

with respect to science; in a scientific way

scientifically

oriented psychological guidance

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hence

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they can easily adapt to harsh war environments quickly

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governments themselves promote all people to excel in their field by promoting their talents by giving

monitary

relating to or involving money

monetary

aids or

resevations

a district that is reserved for particular purpose

reservations

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Consider

Saudhi

of or relating to Saudi Arabia or its people

Saudi

Arabia

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a country following religious rules

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they

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They

implement a rule that

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where it is mandatory to give 20 % seats for women in any job sector as they realised that women are equally

cabable

(usually followed by 'of') having capacity or ability

capable

to do any work and more than their gender their education and

certificate

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certification

matters

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Nitha Ambani

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sucessful

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

women Indian business magnet

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she became an inspiration for

millons

(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units

millions

of girls to choose

MBA

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an MBA

FOR their higher studies

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eventhough

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even though

people are born with different

personalites

the complex of all the attributes--behavioral, temperamental, emotional and mental--that characterize a unique individual

personalities

when it comes to employment sector any person can excel in their job

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with

true passion

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motivation and support

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

326 words

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biological differences
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