Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities . For this reason , their jobs are better done by men and other by women . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
In the society
,
we can see that men are Accept space
,
exceling
in some occupations and women are successful in other jobsvery good;of the highest quality
excellent
excelling
,
some people opine that Accept space
,
this
discripancy
is caused by the inborn features and skills of both gendersa difference between conflicting facts or claims or opinions
discrepancy
.
I disagree with that opinionAccept space
.
.
Accept space
.
Firstly
,
the best performance in one's career is depend on many other factors Accept space
,
such
as dedication ,
will_powerAccept space
,
,
and opportunitiesAccept space
,
.
Accept space
.
For example
,
Manish MalhothraAccept space
,
,
who is a renowned fashion designer in Bollywood film industryAccept space
,
.
Accept space
.
earlier
people believed that women only can Suggestion
Earlier
became
the best dress makers as Suggestion
become
this
field is dominated by females .
ButAccept space
.
,
his Accept space
,
hardwork
and innovative ideas made him the number one option among film stars not only Suggestion
hard work
heros but
Accept comma addition
heroes, but
heroes but
hers but
hears but
also
heroines when they think about a party wear .
Accept space
.
secondly
Suggestion
Secondly
,
in the modern era people get equal training and resources for their professionAccept space
,
.
To illustrateAccept space
.
,
nowadays it is quite common to see female soldiers in Accept space
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Indian Army
because they get muscle strengthening Suggestion
the Indian Army
exercise
and Suggestion
exercises
scientificaly
oriented psychological guidancewith respect to science; in a scientific way
scientifically
,
Accept space
,
hence
they can easily adapt to harsh war environments quickly .
Accept space
.
Moreover
,
governments themselves promote all people to excel in their field by promoting their talents by giving Accept space
,
monitary
aids or relating to or involving money
monetary
resevations
a district that is reserved for particular purpose
reservations
.
Consider Accept space
.
Saudhi
Arabiaof or relating to Saudi Arabia or its people
Saudi
,
a country following religious rulesAccept space
,
.
Accept space
.
they
implement a rule thatSuggestion
They
,
where it is mandatory to give 20 % seats for women in any job sector as they realised that women are equally Accept space
,
cabable
to do any work and more than their gender their education and (usually followed by 'of') having capacity or ability
capable
certificate
mattersSuggestion
certification
.
To illustrateAccept space
.
,
Nitha AmbaniAccept space
,
,
a Accept space
,
sucessful
women Indian business magnethaving succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
,
she became an inspiration for Accept space
,
millons
of girls to choose (in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units
millions
MBA
FOR their higher studiesSuggestion
an MBA
.
To concludeAccept space
.
,
Accept space
,
eventhough
people are born with different Suggestion
even though
personalites
when it comes to employment sector any person can excel in their job the complex of all the attributes--behavioral, temperamental, emotional and mental--that characterize a unique individual
personalities
by
true passionSuggestion
with
,
motivation and supportAccept space
,
.
Accept space
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