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You are an alumnus (alumna) of a Bluegill University, registered in a volunteer program to conduct informal interviews with prospective students. Recently, an entrant has been assigned to you to have an interview.

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Hello Smith.
Iam
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 Jessica Halley (Batch 2013). I am volunteer conducting informal
interview
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 for the Bluegill University admissions office. You have been registered in
university system
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the university system
a university system
 and
iam
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
am
in
 writing to set an
interview
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 with you. The alumina
interview
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 will be relaxed, informal conversation in which you can tell me something about yourself, and I can answer any question you want to ask about
university
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the university
. The
interview
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 is optional, if you want to cancel
it
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it, then
then
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 let me know. Ideally, we should talk sometime in
next
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 two weeks. I usually free on weekends. Would Saturday 10th
oct
the month following September and preceding November
Oct
 8GMT+2 work for you? If not we can chat
next
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 weekend,
oct
the month following September and preceding November
Oct
 18th or 19th. It will remote
interview
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 so, can we
skype
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Skype
? I can
also
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 call on your phone if that’s more convenient to you. Looking forward to hear from you and thank you for having your interest in Bluegill University! Best Wishes, Jessica
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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