You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam,

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I am writing

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letter in response to mail received for a new debit card badge on 25th June.

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, the post was received well within time, but it was missing very important envelope which might contain that card. My main purpose of

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post is to inform you about missing packet. I am not sure how many thing's were included in a whole packet.

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, E-token to reset any password, pin reset instruction for a new ATM chip which might be included in the envelope as well. Just, in case if card has been stolen,

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it will need to be blocked as soon as possible. As I have very high concern on any transactions made with new chips. In any case, It will be a bank's responsibility to identify and block missing badge.

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, any unauthorised transaction made electronically. Nowadays, it's becoming difficult to trace frauds done using the electronic transactions. I would request you to treat

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message on the highest priority. My address details and phone number are mentioned below for any communication to be done regarding

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issue.

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do let me know process to reissue all banking passwords on my latest address. To conclude,

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message serves the purpose to alarm about the loose handling of post system used in a company, which can result in clients loss. I would like to thank you and bank's staff to make my banking experience smooth. Hope that I will have a positive response from you. Name: John Barynt Address: 188 Walker street, South London, Great Britain. Contact number: 812 567 444 321

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

268 words

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The Greeting

Some people believe that professional athletes serve as positive role models for young people, while others argue that their behavior both on and off the field can have a negative influence. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people believe that travelling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of time and money.

More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think are some possible solutions?