you recently travelled on the local bus service in your town. You think the driver drove badly and was rude to the passengers. Write a letter to the manager of the local bus service. In your letter introduce yourself and say when the incident happened describe what you saw and heard say what you would like the bus company to do about it You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir, I am Inderpal, I had travelled from Chandigarh to New Delhi on

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of July. I am writing to a complaint against your bus driver, i.e. DLNC 7073 and his name was Sonu Sharma. As far as the

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is concerned, one of the passengers

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asked him questions regarding any route changes made by him; he answered in a harsh tone regardless of the fact that the person was too old.

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, he stopped the bus in the middle of the highway. In

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, when other passengers took initiative to resolve the matter,

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he was not ready to understand the nuances of the condition. He had stopped the bus for more than an hour without any information given to the traveller and

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when he had realised that departure will be late,

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all of sudden he started driving at

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fast speed just

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the distance. Eventually, I would request you to please look into

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matter and organise some personal development classes for your staff in order make them understand of the importance of a time. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Inderpal