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You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what experience and special skills you have Explain why you are interested in the job

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Dear Sir, My name is Gautam, and I am
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 year student of Arts and
Culture
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 Delhi University. I am writing
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 letter to apply for a job in your City Museum Shop during my vacation, which you published through Advertisement in Economic Times yesterday. I am currently pursuing my degree in Arts and have been rewarded
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 student award consecutively for three years. I have an extreme interest in the Arts and
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 of our country and,
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,
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 to grasp any opportunity, which assists me in achieving
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 goal. I have a deep knowledge of
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culture
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 and tradition of the country.
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, I can speak in 4 different languages
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 as Punjabi, Gujarati, English, and Hindi, which is, in my opinion, is crucial in
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 job and can attract a variety of customers. As these are my holidays, working in your renowned shop will surely boost my learning and
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 help me in increasing my existing knowledge about the
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.
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, apart from some financial benefits, the experience of working in your shop surely improves the opportunity of getting a handsome job once my studies are completed. Attaching my college degrees with
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 letter and hoping for a positive response.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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