Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so.

It is becoming a trend nowadays for children doing a

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job

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in their leisure

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and

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phenomena

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by the parents. Even though

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activity brings beneficial effects for them, it can be followed by several drawbacks. In

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era, young people need to be introduced to the real work life in early

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to understand the efforts of earning

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. By experiencing a

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, children get the mindset that

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comes along with an amount of energy to work on something so that they will be more grateful. The

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advantage of doing

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is children being more independent. It happens because the child feels the chance to obtain their own

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and manage it by their own authority so that their independent side grows well. I take an example, my parents used to give me a pack of petty cash once in a

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week, then

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after I worked on a

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, I could save

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so that my parents could reduce their allowance for me. In other hand, children can feel exhausted because of their

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so that they do not have enough

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to study and rest. It can influence their concentration in the school.

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, they spent their

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to do their

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for at least four to five hours after school,

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they will go home at least at night and the

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morning they will come to school at 07.30 or 08.00 so that it is common to find children being sleepy in their class.

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, children can

loose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

their free

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because they use it for doing a certain

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. Overall, it can be good for children to experience the

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job but

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job, but

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can also bring

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brings any disadvantages.