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In today’s job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications.

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Some people think that having practical skills is vital rather than obtaining an academic qualification nowadays and employees may not need any academic degree in the future. I party
disagree
Suggestion
disagrees
 with
this
 assertion. On the one hand, having practical skills is very essential for job markets nowadays because the percentage of productive work can be increased by skilful workers.
Moreover
, most of people will not spend their time on studying for years, if employers do not ask academic qualifications.
Instead
 of the arguments above, I disagree that employees may not need any formal degree in the future since I believe that well-known companies not only practical skills but
also
 an academic qualification require.
That is
 why people
also
 need to apply for formal degrees and learn theoretical knowledge in order to get a good work.
In addition
, if job applicants have academic qualifications, they can get a lot of opportunities like promotion and earning a higher salary. By the way, employers value education over experience in vocational fields In conclusion,
although
 some people agreed that job applicants may not need any academic degree in the future, I think that employers will require formal qualifications
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