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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the proportions of
water
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 for various goals in North
America
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, South
America
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,
Europe
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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, and Southeast
Asia
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.
Overall
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, almost in every part of the world
water
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 is most consumed for agricultural
use
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, the largest
use
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 for
this
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 purpose is witnessed in Central
Asia
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. In comparison, the smallest proportion of
water
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 is made up of domestic
use
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,
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 least numbers of it are seen in Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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.
The agricultural
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Agricultural
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use
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 is the dominant object in every area, except North
America
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 and
Europe
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. The biggest utilizations are witnessed in Central
Asia
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, Africa, and South East
Asia
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 with 88%, 84% and 81% respectively. The following continent is South
America
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, having 71
percent
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per cent
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 of
water
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.
However
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, they are two regions where
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agricultural
use
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 is not
being
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a leading segment and
account
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accounts
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 for almost a
third
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, which are North
America
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 and
Europe
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 (39% and 32%). In terms of
the
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domestic
use
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, it takes up a small minority for Africa, Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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, which comprise 9%, 7% and 7% respectively. South
America
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 is the area with the largest figure of 19%.
In contrast
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, North
America
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 and
Europe
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 have the least proportions of
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domestic
use
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, comprising less than a fifth percentage of 13% and 15%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america, europe, asia, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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