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These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country

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Nowadays, more students want to
study
 abroad. For many students
study
 abroad is becoming popular.
However
, there are both pros and cons to
deciding
Suggestion
decide
 to do
this
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why
study
 abroad is so popular and some of the challenges to be overcome. I will start by looking at
educational system
Suggestion
the educational system
.
In other words
, system of education is better.
Secondly
, if students live abroad, they will learn to new culture, language, try new food, and be independent.
For instance
, students can improve their language skills
with
Suggestion
by
 communicating with someone. In additional they can find new friends. Turning to the other side of the argument
study
 abroad, students will miss their family, friends and relatives. And if they don't have
place
Suggestion
places
 to leave, takes a lot of time and money to find a flat or somewhere to live. Another problem is that students who
study
 abroad don't have close person who will be with him or her in bad and good days. All things considered,
study
 abroad is never easy. But if students have someone who will help and be with them in that country, it will be easier to
study
 abroad.
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