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Some businesses prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree that this is the right course of action? Give reasons for your opinion

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Latest research approves that smoking is very injurious to
health
. The smokers have
dangerous outcome not
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a dangerous outcome, not
a dangerous outcome not
 only their own
life but
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life, but
 he is
also
 a source of passive smoking to
nearby person
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nearby people
. In the light of
this
,
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,
somking
the act of smoking tobacco or other substances
smoking
 should be outlawed in all public places. Despite the fact that, privacy could be compromised by
this
 movement. Cigarette smoke not only have
nicotine but
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nicotine, but
also
 contain acetone, ammonia, carbon monoxide e.t.c.
In addition
, these components have hazardous results
on
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in
 body fitness. It can Cause and
aggrevate
make worse
aggravate
aggravates
 respiratory problems like asthma, COPD, e.t.c. It
also
 has
effect
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an effect
 on other major body organs.
Furthermore
,
Second
-hand
smoking
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smoke
 has been confirmed as a cause of lung cancer by several leading
health
 facilities.
On the contrary
, a few
number
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numbers
 of people think that Smoke free laws can be an obstacle to tobacco consumption. Some critics of smoke-free laws emphasise the property rights of business owners, drawing a distinction between nominally public places (
such
 as government buildings) and privately owned establishments (
such
 as bars and restaurants). Taking into consideration of both sides
,
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,
the arguments on smoke banishing law are Inadequate and illogical.According to new research of
American
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the American health joint committee
health
 joint committee, quit smoking has far beneficial effects on the whole body.
Overtime
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Over time
, your risk of life threatening
health
problem including
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problem, including
 heart problem and stroke stops dramatically.
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