These days, people work in more than one job, and often change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Nowadays, in many cases, people have to make lots of decisions regarding their career. Some people prefer to
work
in many places and gain life experience
, others argue that this
is not always optimal. Is it really beneficial to be involved in many occupations or is it better to follow your dream path having only the favourite job? (.)
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money
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they find some trivial jobs, such
as being a cleaner, they can become professional specialists after having finished their studies.
Another major positive is that people are able to focus on their main job and additionally
do something else after their work
which might be more interesting. In my experience
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as a software developer for an enterprise and read lectures at university. It was beneficial due to(
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and it was exciting to share my knowledge with(
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For instance
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that is
the most important to you because either you may not prioritize your jobs or you lack time. Therefore
, noteworthy is the fact that it becomes much harder to acquire the required experience
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Another significant drawback of having many jobs is that the life-work
balance deteriorates. For example
, for many, people feel inferior if they lack qualification in their new occupation. It is quite a frequent situation as it is tough to gain a wide variety of work
experience
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In conclusion, the pros and cons of having and switching many jobs were described. In my view, the disadvantages outweigh advantages and it is suggested that people should work
in many places only if they need much money
or temporarily due to other causes.Submitted by Thảo Andy on
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